Hey amanda, thanks a lot! I thought I made it a little too weird for my taste, but it works.

I LOVED IT MIKE!! Its just so perfect! i love you! lol :P cant wait to read the next one!

this poem is great especially as its about a boy sticking up for a girl xx

I'm thinking of writing a poem thats MEAN...oooo...get ready...muahah

5/5! Great job!! I wish there were more guys like you and less like him...Thanks for restoring my faith in men...lol! Again, great poem!

Hey mike that was an awesome poem I got into it alot. You made it sound true. And you got to the real point in life. I am waiting for part 2.

oh wow it grt poem it was awsome good on u :)
always smile
peaceeee

I love it how your poems tell a story......Very good so keep it up!

Are you sure this isn't true? You had me believing it the entire time. Excellent poem.