by Lydie Jul 2, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Falling endlessly, |
by Samantha
Another very unique poem. I don't care for this one as much as the other one I critiqued but I have to say it was still good. One thing you may want to look at is the different forms of 2. There's the number two, too as in also, and to as in "I went to the store". |
by SCARECROW
So I'll have to wait...... |
by Chris
GREAT POEM!!! |