GREAT POEM!!!

So I'll have to wait......
That one line in itself conveys more emotion than most people could with an entire thesis. Incredible piece of work.

Another very unique poem. I don't care for this one as much as the other one I critiqued but I have to say it was still good. One thing you may want to look at is the different forms of 2. There's the number two, too as in also, and to as in "I went to the store".

Just so ya know. ;)