by Kim
suicide isn't going to solve anything. trust me. i've been there b4 |
by Kim
suicide isn't going to solve anything. trust me. i've been there b4 |
by Amanda
wow...that's really sad, i understand that you got raped and were pregnant at 15, have you had the baby yet?? You said you have cancer...do you really...if so, i'm terribly sorry..that's something many battle, and cannot live with, it's a fact...and i'm sorry!! If you love your family so much, why do you wish to follow through with suicide, when it'll make the lives of your family worse?? you know it plays with peoples minds...and sometimes other's commit suicide, because of their loss of a friend or family member...no matter your bad decisions...no matter your secrets, your family will always love you!!! You don't have to use my advice, you don't even have to acknowledge it...but i know what it feels like to lose someone close to you...it hurts!! you can't even go a day with out thinking about that person...and that's all you think about....is the good times..and it makes people think that it's their faults!! Don't do it...you're an amazing poet...and i'll bet you'd have a wonderful life ahead of you...if you just change your attitude towards life, around!! Please...remember your family before your knife!! |
Ok listen here girly- |
by Chelsey
*tear, tear, tear*, WOw hun I am So0o0 sorry... I mean gosh I had two tears on each cheek by the end of this! Everyone else has said what I wanted to say, but let me tell you girl, if anything, JESUS is your answer, before you go through with suicide (PLEASE DONT), pray about it please! It honostly is not your time to go. I know it may be so hard being pregnant at 15 girl, and having cancer but if you just BELIEVE, you will have someone already by your side, God. If you just pray about it I promise you it will be better. DO IT PLEASE!! May God be with you and I hope you hang in there |
oh my god i love it. it feels like ive been through the same sh*t. thats a very beautiful poem <3 ~~Nikki |
this is so sad |
by tabithaa
that was flipping awesome... |
u have got to tell me evwything in like person...or by email is okie...soo sad ='( |
sorry that stuff had to happen to u if you got raped it shouldnt b ur fault because he forced u to do somethin u didnt want to do well RIP girl |
by Kalie
hey that was really awesome... do u really have cancer or were just trying to rhyme.. if u want u can check out some of my poems |
sad it made me cry a bit... would say more but my mom is makin me get off :( ♥ marissa |
by heartofcold
love your poem it was very long though... |
by Liz
that seoriously made me cry... i love your poem!! keep writing! |
thats really sad im cryin u r really talented |
by Kel
i loved ur poem...i agree with the ppl about....suicide is not the aswer...i have been there b4..i would have regret comitting suicide |
by Priscylla
powerful, awesome, amazing.... just wow 5/5 |
OMG! This poem is so touching... I almost cried. OMG OMG OMG!! It was soooo good!! 5/5! Hope everything gets better hun! |
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Omg |
by MaX~
Beautiful, one of the best poems ive read this month, amazing, keep writting strong |