muy buena poema es o bonita

Hey thats a really good poem i rated it a 5 aight?..well can u do me a favor n chek out my poems?..i'd really appreciate it k?..bye!

~ ShOrTy~

Steven,

I do not intend to be an ass, but I think the Spanish version is a bit flawed. I will certainly help you edit it, if you wish.

Regards,
HansRik