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by BLaCK_RoSeS Jul 2, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / about death
This is a love story it begins to warm you heart but then theres a twist and everything falls apart Dan and Julia, made a bet to go out for thirty days after that, they'll just be friends and go their separate ways On their first date, Dan and Julia kissed he gave her a bracelet which hanged around her wrist On their second date, they saw a shooting star Julia mumbled something under her breath Dan held her in his car They began to fall in love you could see the twinkle in their eyes but something was about to happen it'll come to you as a big surprise On their 29th date they had a picnic in the night they watched the stars peep out and the clocked stroked midnight Dan went to get the champagne which he left in the boot of his car he left Julia on her own she was watching the stars suddenly a man comes up to Julia he was shaking, covered in blood he told he that he had run over her boyfriend she began to cry a flood they took Dan to a hospital he told Julia he loved her he looked straight at her in the eye and they were perfect for each other She told him she loved him and she would never let him go he held her hand, kissed her and her tears began to flow Julia held his hand and Dan began to fade away finally he died on the 30th day...
by Julia
wow, this poem is really good...its so sad!!!