Dead by Dawn (reposted)

by Taylor   Jul 2, 2005


There once was a boy
And there once was a girl
When the girl saw the boy
She thought she would hurl

He was a geek
A major one at that
Not to mention the fact
That he was a little bit fat

She was just perfect
Skinny and popular
But that didn't stop him
From getting a crush on her

One day he asked her out
Not knowing what he did
Was absolutely hilarious
And unbelievably stupid

"Sure, yeah right!"
She said flipping her hair
"You're just a stupid geek,
Don't even go there!"

She laughed and walked away
Pretty happy, I bet,
But she didn't know
That's a statement she'd regret

The boy got home
Depressed and upset
He took his dad's gun
He started to sweat

He left the house at night
And went to her house
The door was un locked
He snuck in like a mouse

He soon found her room
And with gun in hand
Stood by her bed and yelled
"I'LL BE YOUR MAN!"

She woke up with a start
And saw him with a gun
She wanted to scream
She wanted to run

"This is what you get
When you call me a geek
When you say I'm stupid
And I'm simply a freak!"

He pointed the gun at her head
She was in quite an endeavor
"This is the only way we could be
Together Forever"

He pulled the trigger
BAM! She was gone
He put the gun in his mouth
They were both dead by dawn

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow....that is one thing that scares me the most. Making someone kill themselves. I'm not saying that I am someone to dill yourself over but some people are really crazy and you never know....that was really sad and the "geek" was terribly dumb but the girl didn't have to be so cruel. I loved the idea of your poem.....real creative and I loved the last line "They were both dead by dawn". Great job on this one. (like that is something new) lol.5/5

    TAKE CARE-
    stargazer38

  • 19 years ago

    by morgan

    powerful poem... you rock...

    keep writing..

    luv your sissy

  • That is really good, you have great talent !! Keep Writing !!
    XxX Charli XxX ~*~