That is really good, you have great talent !! Keep Writing !!
XxX Charli XxX ~*~

powerful poem... you rock...

keep writing..

luv your sissy

Wow....that is one thing that scares me the most. Making someone kill themselves. I'm not saying that I am someone to dill yourself over but some people are really crazy and you never know....that was really sad and the "geek" was terribly dumb but the girl didn't have to be so cruel. I loved the idea of your poem.....real creative and I loved the last line "They were both dead by dawn". Great job on this one. (like that is something new) lol.5/5

TAKE CARE-
stargazer38