good poem.I enjoyed it.

Hey I love your poem please write more because it has inspired me in many ways
Bridgette

Hey michelle ur so cool for commentin on my poem and its great to know i am not the only one who feels this way and wat u said did help so words sometimes can be stronger than actions Love bridgette

great poem

Wow! That was a really sweet poem. I loved the line where you wrote:
"I could fal into your eyes..."

Great job:) And thank you so much for the comments on my poem. It really made my day:)