wow you did a wonderful job on all of them and i am sorry that’s a true story it so sad no one should deal with that. keep up the wonderful work 5/5

Oh my god. I don't ever cry, and this poem brought tears to my eyes. It was amazingly written and just...wow! I don't even think i can articulate it into words how wonderful it is. Since it's based on a true story, i send out hugs to all affected by this. I am truly sorry that happened to them and to the people close to those two. No one should have to endure such pain. I cannot wait to read some more of your work....*stands in awe* 5/5 for sure. And take care, and keep writing. If everything is as amazing as that...wow *stands in awe some more* oh, is it okay if I give credit to that if I post it on another Poem site? I will credit you, anyone who writes that well deserves credit! Okay now I'm done rambling. Take care *big hug*
~Rae

i cant believe this is a true story...great job putting so much emotion into it...i really felt everything you wrote. take care!!

OMGGGGGGGGG THAT poem was f in great u are flipin talented it gave me shivers keep up the good work