this poem is good..it could be a little longer but its still good over all..thanks for commenting on mine!keep up the good work!
xoxo
<3Jess

its kinda cool since hearing ur story cuz now i can tell when you wrote these poems. lol.

I like it .. but i thikn itd be better if the lines in between "IM happy because .." rhymed

I'm very very happy...for finding someone like you..:P...ok...nothing much to say about this...luv ya...Jane