Wow... that's really intriguing - if that's how you spell that... thankyou for you comment on my poem :D

Cheers

-Lyd

this is wonderful though it's so sad.
you write wonderfully jaded. keep it
up.
marjan

I truly can identify with this poem...wonderfully written. Lovely flow...thank you for posting :)

xxx

hey, this was original....when i read the title i did not expect it to be soo interesting!!!! i liked the use of words they wernt over used or forced to rhyme it just flowed...i enjoyed reading it...you should write a part 2..it would be good
your a talented writer keep it up :)
lisa x)

Wow i love it. Such a powerful poem, conveying your feelings so well. I love the lonely eyes bit :D

Nicely done. I loved this poem. Definitely one of the better ones I have read. Very cool.
~Faith of the Fallen