hey sweetie! this is an amazing poem. i love u so much keep up the great work.
love always and forever and more
amanda

to my lover
from ur lover

Wow! i almost cried reading this poem. Its so sad...
Very well written on the other hand though.
btw you misspelled for in this paragraph...

she screamed fro help
but never asked
and all she felt
ended the day she couldn't last

5/5 anyways. It was good.