well done girl. you write very well. keep it up. love you, marjan

well done girl. you write very well. keep it up. love you, marjan

awesome. just awesome. you were writing everything that came to mind, it seemed to me. very natural and thats what I love about your poems. there not forced and most of them don't rhyme a lot, but that makes them so much more interesting.

take care,
Renee

very poetic! short syllables used to create feeling and setting and the result- an absolutely amazeing poem! excellent work! your so talented and just so ya know ive added you to ma fave list
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*bec* xXx
and thanks so much for ya comments they are greatly appreciated