good....it was so suspenseful

wow strong message, loved it.

Jacs
xxx

wow thats so sad and so well written. I hate to qrite such short comments but theres not much more to say. Exellent!

love it

short, simple, but excellent. love this as well.

xxx

Eerie poem. Nice work. X

ooo nice poem. sometimes I feel like this, just running from life. but it attacks me with all these problems and I just start going downhill. and eventually I feel like im just dead to the world. I don't know If you meant it as symbolic towards something like that, but thats how I thought of it. Good job!

Take care,
Renee

This was very good! I loved it. 5/5

Are you speaking of LIFE or an actual event...it could be both I guess. I like that. I was taken by the very first stanza and never lost interest. I love the way you worded it all....very unique. Another excellent write!

That is so sad, did that happen to someone you know?

i really like this poem, but i don't understand the ending. keep it up though

5/5 i loved that, it was very emotional and was worded nicley for the most part.

At first I thought this was all metaphors, leading to something like the evil within yourself....then I realize, it has nothing to do with the title. =)

You've done a splendid job, M'Dear.

My favourite stanza:

"The evil in him,
I can sense.
His heart so cold,
My thoughts so tense."

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