by Katrina Boblina Jul 3, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Cold metal bars scatter the sun, |
I did actually really like reading this poem i like poems that are not the same as everyone elses it was different and gave me a whole new world :) i felt like i was the character in your poem :):) i realy did like it :):) |
by blueknight
A poems that didnt rhyme yeah i dont like that kind of poem but then a great poem can be an exemption like this one even though it dosnt rhyme the flow and idea was great the form are really cool i like the ending of it great 5/5 |
by Natalie
Wow-- This was amazing! Loved all the imagry in this piece! It was a really intense write that kept me sitting at the end of my chair. Tehe. I loved it. Great job! 5/5 |
Very expressive... i guess i can kind of relate since im starting to lose my mind? -.-;; |
by Arora
wow..... 5/5 keep writing... good job. |