Your a really good writer! Another good poem!

awsome work =D 5/5..! If you got time it would mean a lot if you checked out my poem "My dad:dead and gone forever" thanks a lot.. hugs

good poem, deep and meaningful.
well done again.

Jacs
xxx

wow that was very goo.d In the eyes of a criminal. Great!

captivating imagery expressing insanity great poem

you portrayed this insane person so well, amazing! i love it. very imaginative.

xxx

"They would even look past my heart,
If it weren't a black hole."

Lovely. This whole poem was lovely. and it really sounded like you knew what you were talking about. are YOU insane? haha just playing. and if you are, I still love you!

Take care,
Renee

I liked it. Keep writing.

Nana

This poem was sad, but I l0ved it

great beginning...the first line really sucked me in.

It's important to be able to draw your readers in like that.

Great piece.

i really liked this poem
it was discriptive and had meaning
great job

wow..... 5/5 keep writing... good job.
<3

Very expressive... i guess i can kind of relate since im starting to lose my mind? -.-;;
but... anyways, i loved it :) 5/5

Wow-- This was amazing! Loved all the imagry in this piece! It was a really intense write that kept me sitting at the end of my chair. Tehe. I loved it. Great job! 5/5

Natalie``

A poems that didnt rhyme yeah i dont like that kind of poem but then a great poem can be an exemption like this one even though it dosnt rhyme the flow and idea was great the form are really cool i like the ending of it great 5/5

Geneross

I did actually really like reading this poem i like poems that are not the same as everyone elses it was different and gave me a whole new world :) i felt like i was the character in your poem :):) i realy did like it :):)