great poem! check out mine some time tell me what youi think

It is a pretty intense poem Seth! Good job. You really know how to describe your feelings and make the reader feel what you are going through! Keep it up! I give you 5/5.

~Girl, Interrupted~

i love that poem!

AWESOME POEM, MAN! That girl is a biotch. Anyway... keep up the good work man.

~Holla Back, young'n~