wow i am at aw i wish i could write like THAT!!
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Excellent Display Of Darkness! I Love Dark Poems, And You Served This One Justice 5/5! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

very well written...this is a very good peice, however, all the rhyming kind of got old...so maybe try to hold it down to every other line unless you can get it to flow smoother than it did...otherwise, nice job! keep it up!