thant was a good poem. plz e-mail me sometime at jnb91@bendbroadband.com

i would love to talk to you.

I got the chills like 4 times

I'm speechless, that was so sad and emotional, got tears in my eys now!!! Really heartbreaking!!!
AMAZING...

*Love Sabrina*

thats so sad!

i thought the poem was really good and i would like to read more .plz check out my poems nd rate thanx

seth...that made me cry..thanx alot..jk
i loved it! keep it up! you have alot of talent!
LOVE:heather

really great poem, i really liked it alot
harley

Iii have nothing to say omg that was the most sadest thing that i have EVER read whoaaa!!! awesome poem keep it up ur the best writer i've ever seen!

Not my type of poem to be honest...the subject was too "cliche" for me.
Also, what was the reason behind the random capital and lower case letters, it was confusing and did nothing for the poem.
It flowed ok, and although the rhyme was basic it worked.
Rather then describing her eyes as "brown" a bit of a more creative approach would have been nice. I know it's difficult to descripbe eyes though, I've just written a full poem about blue eyes.
Overall, could still use a bit of work (creative language and grammar correction) but thanks for sharing.

That is ssoo sad, man why am I reading only the sad poems? I guess the interesting titles are the ones that are sad but yea really good poem, just like the rest. Keep it up!