well, you are like a lot of other daughters, no matter what you think. and I'm sure a lot of teenagers understand you, like myself. stay strong, and continue writing your feelings down. It will help in the long run and maybe try to substitute writing for the cutting.

Take care,
Renee

This is a good poem, its short but it doesnt need to be any longer, it makes the point very well and I can relate to it, well done I enjoyed this one

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aWWW so sad . I understand whta your talking about in this poem ....how you feel .. I hope your ok
xox
April

simple and great at the same time
well expressed
loved it
keep your work

well i must say for a cutting poem i loved it! i like these types i dont like the ones that describe cutting... thats their business i dont need to know about anway back to your poem i loved it very sad and emotional and poetic! well done!
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*bec* xXx

ahh so sad :( well my dear i cut also and my mom feels the same so if you ever need to chat email me!!!

xoxo,
chels

hey i was a cutter since i was 13 and i stopped cuz my parents forced me too. I think about it alot. And i wish i could do it one more time. Right me back gurl.

wow...amazing!!! i can relate, although i don't cut anymore. i really hope you realize that cutting isn't the answer... there are other ways to feel better... anyways, beautiful poem! stay strong and take care,
Ariane
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Great way to write down your feelings. I feel poems help me to cope with everyday problems, thoughts and feelings. Believe it or not many teens feel upset, lonely, depressed and trapped every day and so do alot of adults. Don't give up and talk to some people on here who experience the same as you every day like me. I sometimes fall into depression and can't get out. I am on top of it all at the moment so fingers crossed it will stay like this. Take care hun and keep smiling. :)

I am lucky i don't cut but i cry alot when i am depressed. :)

Great poem! Nice flow! =D

Truly sensational poem.I enjoyed it.and thanks for reading my poem too.It meant alot.

nice job! keep writing!

I like the way you managed to talk about so much but keep it short and to the point. X

Great Title!

LOVED that last line!! i can understand..althought i'm not a girl, I loved it! very creative! 5/5

aw...thats sad but good job on the poem lol. its really good!

I really like it, it has a really good message.

You CAN stop you just have to want to. You can do anything if you put your mind to it!

This seems to be the case for many young girls. It's really sad to see so many people wanting to be "perfect" to make other people happy. No one is perfect my dear. Nicely done though...this is full of emotion and pain and you definately push that out.

Take care!

I actually like that you didn't go into imagery...so well done...i believe "bulled" should be bullied - missed an "i."

And, dear, you CAN stop. Hang in there.

xxx