Lost Love

by jello   Jul 3, 2005


Because i loved you i held your hand that night
Just as long as you treated me right

But that was the past, now nothing seems alright
That last night i held you was the day that you died
I couldn't help it i cried

Yesterday is the today that we wished for more
The today that we morn for

Drained of everything good left with all the bad
I feel myself sink lower and lower
All i can do is let all the tears pore

Please don't send your ghost to protect me
Ghosts are just lost memories
Their a waste of time
I don't need that i need more

I need for you to come back and kiss away the tears
So i can smile again
But the ghost of you will always haunt my dreams

I can feel myself dying inside
It seems like there's nothing left

But i know if i keep praying i'll find some way to forget
Somehow i'll get over this and dream of better days
Days when i'm not lonely and afraid
I feel lost without you
What am i gonna do?

I just hope you'll always know that i love you
You see these are my weaknesses For people to know that their loved and beautiful
And Of course you

Your the only person i've ever loved like this
Just remember i will always love you

*This isn't about anyone or anything i'm just...i just made this up...*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    I love the structure of this its kinda random but it really works well keep writing! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    This is ok. i like this line the best:
    But the ghost of you will always haunt my dreams

    i think it would be better if the lines were arranged a little differently. but overall nice job

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    That was so sweet... I loved it. It was sad though. I think you should change where you put it..I would put it in Love Poems. Sorry to critquie you writing but you have a few spelling mistakes...
    "That last night i hled.."
    "I can feel myseld.."
    I think you mean 'held' and 'myself'.

    Great work though I love the poem overall.
    ~Juls~