hey thanks for the comments. i really like ur stuff especially this one. and thanks for pointing out my erros. and to let you know i don't cut. but i had a dream i did and i felt like i needed to. and the next morning i woke up and i had cut my arm in my sllep with a toothpick. i got help from my friends and family and no more sleep cutting.
i hope this poem isn't about you.
its really good but i hope you don't think this way about yuorself. because it doesn't matter what other people think about it matters what you think about yourself. and god made everyone beatuiful in there own way.
~Shellshel

Shellshel,

Your welcome. I'm glad to know you don't cut. That's odd, sleep cutting...but that's great you got help. :)

At times I do feel this way. I do know that every person is beautiful...but thank you for the feedback. Much appreciated.

undying blusher
xxxx

long but worth the read. Sad...and untrue...well..true to society I suppose...I like this poem..It makes you think...
~*Freak*~

hon... you are beautiful, just like them. dont feel bad about yourself, please, you dont deserve it. just believe me... you're beautiful to God and anyone who denies that is wrong. 5/5

that poem is so true, many people chase perfection, and still more outpush those not perfect, great message.. you have much talent