This was a very good poem you did an excellent job. i can relate real well to this and for that i gotta give you your props. keep up the good work. -Gina Rivera aka VanillaChocolate aka Captin Gin .lol.

Im sorry, you guys are all ridiculous. I know everyones going to hate me now, but the rhyme scheme was AA, BB, CC, DD, EE, FF, GG, HH, etc, etc, etc. I am crying. This was unoriginal, unrhythymic, un poetic, and he said screaming about seven times. You guys are all saps.

All hate mail should be sent to justin_groft@hotmail.com, go out and read some real poetry. Have a nice day!

OH MY GOD!! What a strong poem! I feel just he same :( doesn't love suck :( Wow I really do love this poem! Good work :)

dude, this poem is really cool. but i think greed day sucks.but the poem still rocks.\m/-_-\m/

i love this poem, i feel like this with my current boyfriend sometimes, sometimes i wonder whats really going on between us... i know i love him, i know he loves me, but whats between the lines that i can't see?

totally a five though, i'm gonna check out some more of your poems! pretty good for your age, loved it! awesome keep up the great writing and the awesome work!

one of the best poems i have read so far. thanx for the good stuff

i thot it was gr8.. thumbs up
keep on writing!!
take care

OMG!!! BEAUTIFUL!!!...sorry i am pretty much speechless...i REALLY REALLY LOVED IT!!

Wow.. ur very good.. i wish i was as good as u... I love this poem... Nice work.. keep it up!!! Love: ferny...

Wow.. ur very good... I love this poem.. i wish i was as good as u... Keep it up.... Love: Ferny

that is really good!!!!!!!!! i love it

that was awesome!!

That was a VERY good poem, but I don't exactly get it. Could you comment me back and let me know please and thank you.

That was a VERY good poem, but I don't exactly get it. Could you comment me back and let me know please and thank you.

that was sooo deep....keep it up playa ...it was hot...halla

WOW! nice job i know that i have a rele long way to reach this perfect level in writing.

Plz read some of my poems n give me some comment abt how i can be like u in writing.

i luved it very much keep up the good work!!!!

Hey that was reall ygood . i mean that ws like_________ lost of adjectives 4 real real that as slammin

Wow, very nice writing. I can totally relate, and the way you've said those words really touched me as I've felt those same feelings as you just recently. Thanks for the different view, keep it up and good luck with that whole "love" thing. Check mine out sometime, might touch you as you have touched me.