Dear God

by angelprincess   Jul 4, 2005


I see the wild flowers
How they grow so beautifully
Down by the river
As it flows down around the bend,
So free and wild yet totally in control
How I wish life could be this way
Instead of totally out of control,
Not knowing what to do
Or where to go next,
Life is crashing down
But only I can see
Everyone's to busy doing little jobs
But if they stopped and looked
They would see the real me
Who I really am
A lonely teen-aged girl.

Please leave a comment and vote I wrote this when I was upset and when I felt that I couldn't do anything right.

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  • 19 years ago

    by angelprincess

    Yeah I wrote it when I was in a bad mood, I was wanting to write someting nice it didn't really work but I still kinda like it i guess

  • 19 years ago

    by natalie

    I like it, but it feels like it cud have gone one way, but it didnt and went another...arghh i have confused myself now, i like it anyway :D