O_O;;
This poem is quite... dark? Man, hopefully this doesn't refllect on anything going on in your life right now. I ummm.... liked, well... at least you can tell a good story.

Aken Sol

hahaha, well that was an invigorating and entertaining story. I certainly enjoyed all the blood and whatnot. I am getting the feeling, however, that there is a deeper meaning, regardless of whether you meant it or not. There certainly is a lot of thematic elements concerning betrayal and revenge, which is always good, but I can't tell if there is a lesson to be learned, which would be neat too. Anyhow, who knows what I'm talking about.