pure amazement my darling. pure amazement. beautyful. i love the depths in all your poems. please write some more soon? you dont write enough. even if theyre one line long and abslute rubbish.

luv yas
xxx

Great poem. you have a way with words. i've enjoyed all your poems that i've read, you have talent. keep it up and thanks for the comment:)xxx

I really do adore every single of your absolutly amazing poem mads.. they're so full of emotions and feelings trying to express theirselves..... Oh I adore it all....
And this one is fantabulous....

Thanks for commenting on mine,

Luv ya

I loved it, its all but true

-keep it real

faithfulserenity

Oooh cool! Is this an allegory for either life or love? Or neither? I liked the extended metaphor anyway.