I love you

by mistake   Jul 4, 2005


I live a sad life a sad life i lead
i am alone in this i am in need

to many times you've broken my heart
but now it seems were finally apart

i loved you once with all joy
but you played me like a toy

i loved you i truly did
by now my feelings are hid

you think I'm fine that i was OK
but now my days are full of Grey

because i loved you with all my soul
but now my souls as black as coal

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  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    You have great writing skills, you really made me feel your pain.

  • 16 years ago

    by mistake

    Just came on and noticed your comment lol, i am very happy you commented and rated but this is my old account. my new(and better(i dearly hope)) account is deadly sun. but i will now happily do the same for you:). (also this is not me guilt tripping you into commenting on another in the other so don't feel you have to:P) xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    i feel this way to, nice job keep it up 5/5

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