well done good poem, not worth commiting suicide over someone else tho. As a mate of mine said, when everyone turns round and says they hate her, then commit suicide, because no-one would care.

nice poem, dnt no if there was n e meaning 2 it, i hope not :( hope u dnt think tht someone wud do tht 2 u

MaTt

Hey again, this is a great poem. I really liked the idea of a fallen angel. Great work x x x

This is a great poem. Keep up the good work. :)

Very emotional write that touched my, honestly, I written just one poem about suicide yet though this is a theme as deep as you described. Because behind every suicide there's a story and I liked how you added the Fallen Angel to the story which fits so perfectly. The last 5 lines are my favourite sounding so definite and sad though it seems like a deliverance for her.
5/5

Keep it up
Sabine

P.S. : Please, comment and vote on one of my poems that would mean so much to me. Thank you a lot.

Thats really sad:(
really nice poem apart from the sadness and depression that came across in it...but its feelings i guess. you're on my favourites btw:P
take care hun xx x