Great write! It's always great to prove others wrong, but it's heart breaking when, in doing so, it's not at all what you expected it to be!

wow this amazed me, i can reallty relate to this poem! relationships are really hard but when they fall everything is gone!....G-R-E-A-T job! keep at it!!!

:)--**({eMILY**

liked ALOT! but the last sentence was confusing;/ "but an unexpected event of bad luck."

You are such a romantic!;) Well written, as usual, however dont know if i quite agree with the ending. Our relationships are all worthwhile, even though that person may not be the 'one' they teach us lessons that we can carry with us and grow from in order to prepare for the perfect one. That may sound kind of 'playerish' but really it's true, if all our relationships worked out, then we'd never meet the single most important person in our lives. :) Good write again.

Ana*