All I Wanted

by Laura   Jul 4, 2005


You make my heart beat faster than ever before,
My palms get sweaty and you leave me wanting more.
The world starts turning,
And I can feel my dreams start burning.
Thinking one day this may all come to an end,
Recklessly living life not knowing what is around the bend.
Realizing that my dreams may never come true,
All I wanted was to be the one for you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Short, sweet, to the point. Flow was dead on and the ryhmes weren't forced. It seem to have a lot of thought behind it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow this is really good! I love your poems you really speak out and there personal and thats how I like to write.
    Me and you have something in common so please dont be a stranger i would love to read ur feedback anytime!

  • 19 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow.. this was really good, short, but the point was put across very well, and you did a great job, Nice rhyming, and had a great flow, 5/5, and thanks so much for the comment, I appreciate it alot.

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