Wow.. this was really good, short, but the point was put across very well, and you did a great job, Nice rhyming, and had a great flow, 5/5, and thanks so much for the comment, I appreciate it alot.

Wow this is really good! I love your poems you really speak out and there personal and thats how I like to write.
Me and you have something in common so please dont be a stranger i would love to read ur feedback anytime!

Short, sweet, to the point. Flow was dead on and the ryhmes weren't forced. It seem to have a lot of thought behind it.