That was beautiful. I am so sorry about your dad, but i am so happy that you wrote about it. This is what poetry is for, like my sis says, an outlet. Writing is the reason for not having to keep everything in side....I know you can pull through. Keep your thoughts about everything pure....think the best.......Once again i'm sorry, but you don't need my pity. Stay strong. godbless...

Hey i really liked ur poem and you wrote on mine about my dad commiting suicide (sorry if its been a long time i just got on this again) well i guess its really difficult for most people and its really different i didnt really cope with it i cried myself to sleep everynight wondering why he did it and thinking it wwas my fault. but before he did it he wrote me and my mom a letter and i was happy that he did that but not so happy that he died and now my mom is married again and it just feels so weird and its been a little over 2 year he died on august 11th 2003 and this is what we picked out for his funeral.........sry i cant find it if i do ill write it to you but just keep ur chin up and remember ur not alone one thing that i did was I had a journal and i wrote to him and felt like maybe if i wrote to him he could read it and ive stopped thati still do it every once in a while though you can write to me anytime if you wanna talk about it!!
Kirsten

Hey thanx so much for that comment, when people write things on hear it really does cheer me up and make me think that people care, coz i think im alone in the world atm and feel like every has just forgot bout him and im the only one whos dying inside, thanx agen x