its really really good... but i dont get the end when you say i want to hold you once more... is it to self harm or a loved one?
anyway, great work xxxx

I read all your poems, brought me to tears....I missed you so much, all your poems are amazing, i'm so glad to be home now...never realized how long a week could be....love you with all my heart and soul....i cant wait to see you again....stay strong....hope your ok
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Wonderful poem. it's really creative and i like the idea. thanks for the comment on Dear Ma, but it's not true, just i guess my way to show apperciation to poets on here i guess. thanks for caring! hope things are going good with you too! well i've been gone that past 8 days at my grandparents so sorry it took so long to start reading your new work. tomarrow once i have more time i promise to come and read your new poems!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

Excellent poem! 5