Beautiful Hell

by LostHopesCrimsonTears   Jul 4, 2005


Her crimson tears shall fall like rain
Releasing her from this life;
Her greatest pain

As she fades she wonders,
Is she soon pass on to a greater place,
Or shall she be just another disgrace?

Shes falling now
She begins to see
The light ahead that will set her free

Or is it darkness
She cant yet tell
Will she become an angel or be sent to Hell?

As she stands on the edge, now looking back,
She yells out, askin' for another chance,
But no one answers back.

Then after a while, she begins to smile,
As she jumps into the abyss.
Who knew hell could be as beautiful as this...?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Wow great piece.. you had an excellent rhyming scheme to it.. i loved it a very powerful piece.. great job 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Another really poweful poem. Your image of Hell being a beautiful place - the one place that can rid you of the pains of real life. Great imagery - it works so well in context. Amazing piece.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great peice, though i feel that the 4th stanza was slightly weaker than the rest this hardly effects the overall peice in any adverse mannor as the remander has such power to not be effected (that did make sence in my mind but really doesn't now... hope you understand what i meant).

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I loved it. you are really talented and I think that you should keep it up. :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by I Where the Wings of A Fallen Angel..

    That was a realy good poem! 5/5

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