Comments : A Pool of Pain

  • 20 years ago

    by lawrence

    another wonderful piece of work. and as before, shows great maturity. the awakening in the last verse is heartbreaking. the weakness not from the draining of the blood but a realisation that you've been beaten to give up the fight. that's my take anyways. great work Casey! looking forward to more from you. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Mary Rose

    Nice poem.. 5/5