great poem it's very deep

i luv ur poem i can relate to this 2!! expecilly after brent died!! u have a lot of talent keep up the good work!!

Thats intense and magnificent! Yopu held all the imagary together so well it completly flowed. Just MAGNIFICANT! I can't hink of another way to describe it. So Sad, So Powerful. Keep Writing and I hope you find a way to the light.

Very good poem - i feel the same way keep up the good work

Hey i like this poem its very deep and i know how you feel. i have felt like this before.

I'm truly lost for words to say. its sad and I know how you feel I feel that way everyday.

Aww, that's so sad. i totally loved it. 5/5 um, i put you on my favorite list. i really love your poetry.

I can really relate to this poem. its touching nd sad....realli good !!

Thanks so much hunni for reading my stuff and actually taking the time to read my heart... you are a beautiful writer hunni...now me im not really good at it but you really have a talent thank you though.

~Hurting Inside~

You're such a great artist! i checked out most of your poems too, wonderful style! if you need to talk, i'll be here too!

*5/5*
Take Care
Lolli