I like the way you used different words unlike all your other ones. But who is this one about? lol. j/k. I'm sorry dude. lol. Well I love it. It's really good. I voted a 5 earlier so yeah. I wish I could vote again. l8erz. kilman = David B. p.s. I think mines doing pretty good for something I wrote as an experemental thing. lol. Thanks for your support dude. Life sucks right now. Lauren is so freaking pissed at me but I'll tell you more l8er. Call me tuesday if you can. l8erz.

man this was good so deep!!! i like the repetion(sp?) at the start and the end....mad it mean more!!! its completely diffrent to my poem like a rose much better your words just fit!!!! theres no forced ryhming its just frm the heart :) well done

Just...beautiful... I specially love how you used the thorns...the whole poem is worded so well, nice description, and the repetition is a nice touch as well. Lovely.

xxx

Wow!! Brilliant! This is my favorite! I especially love the 4th paragraph. Well written, nice thoughts:D

Ana*

So sad made me cry

Awww.. It's beautiful sweetheart. Very well written. Keep it up : ) Luff youse *huggles*

~Jessica

Thanks for the comments on mine. i appreciate them. well done, i must say. good poem.

Yea..im gunna remake this one if that is ok...its for Yuri's card..k....thanks...later...matt