Loneliness

by A Broken Bleeding Soul   Jul 5, 2005


*This poem sucks... at least I think so*

Loneliness has the power to bring me down
In more than one way
The effects are beginning to become apparent
By each passing day

My eyes become so cold and distant
Impossible to look inside
Covering up all my pain
And my thoughts of suicide

And these crimson threads so deep
Add up every time I cry
And every time I shed a tear
I have sudden wishes of wanting to die

Loneliness fills me up once again
Filling up the empty holes in my heart
It fills me up to such an extent
Where I begin to fall apart

Loneliness brings me down
I’m falling as I speak
Never would I ever thought
That I would grow to be so weak

Never will you see me so weak
You’ll never see it in my eyes
I’ll always hide it so you won’t see
Or hear it in my cries

© Copyright 2005

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  • 19 years ago

    by þŗ℮††ỵ ġįŗłş мåk℮ ġŗåv℮ş. ♥ ××

    as if it was shit, none of your poems are shit, your so tallented

  • 19 years ago

    by EJ

    ok i dont know what your talking about the poem sucks!! so far any of yours i have read have been good.. and this was good too!! i'm so sorry about everything that you have been through.. but stay strong!! bye bye EJ

  • 19 years ago

    by x~broken~angel~x

    omg, i can relate SO much to this poem! i love it! it doesnt suck, i love ur poems they are so good! and some of them have so much emotion that i have been crying as i read! when i am alone, i have a soft toy that has the smell of my bestie em on it, i hold it close to me and it feels like she is with me. please comment on one of my poems if u have the time! xxx stay strong and i am so sorry about danny.

  • 19 years ago

    by Denise

    I thought it was great!!!!!!!!
    Xoxo
    Denise

  • 19 years ago

    by *!Preston!*

    your poems are so powerful and moving 5/5

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