Eeeek no cutting is bad........ poem = really good cuz I can relate, I really liked the first one of ur that I read tho so this one's a step down but I can relate and it flowed well so id give it a 4.8

WOW that is so true...the way you decribed it. AMAZINNGGGG :) Keep writn woow i am jealous you got succh talent.....

LIS

This is a really powerfull poem! I love it how you had it as a game and then in the end you lost, Keep it up =]

Luv Natz x0x

I don't like things that glorify cutting in anyway, so that to me was the drawback of this poem. It was well written, and I know what you meant by it, cutting is a part of my life as well. I don't know just calling it romanitic bothered me I guess, because I know how horrible cutting is I just can handle it being called Romantic. The last few lines helped though:

The game suddenly comes to a halt.
But it's not the blades fault.
I have lost.
And I pay the ultimate cost.

Suicide and cutting are wrong, bad and just pain stupid, lessons that took me a long time to learn. I wish you the best of luck with all the trials you are going through right now.

-Tainted Mikochan