by Tom Swart
Thanks Nazeer - I have read some of your works and see that it is true you too have the gift of compassion and love in your words. I have truely enjoyed your poems and look forward to reading more.. |
by Gracie Jo
Very beautiful & sweet. =] |
This poem touched me so deeply(read my piece'The Last Good-bye and you'll see why).This is just heartbreaking yet beautiful.I see you refered to it as a nonet-I've seen others use this form except with a 10, 9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 syllable count and called an etheree(Bob Shank and a couple others names who escape me have used it).It is hard to write traditional/structured poems(have tried a few myself but am more comfortable with free verse).This is extremely well done.The form is great and the emotion really comes through. |