I cannot write today

by blackrose1011   Jul 5, 2005


I can’t write like this...

Left every line blank-
Of time and space.
Verbs are nouns, adjectives lost…
Every time I think of you.

Your eyes confuse me-
Our worlds have collided, I am so
Unprepared for what lies ahead.

*your all missing it! look at the poem, It says more then what your reading! I can't do any more then what I've done to make it stand out...*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    It's an acrostic. It says I love you. Clever, well done. =) Great work. xoxoxo

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    If you have a metaphorical meaning to your poem, don't worry about telling people to understand it. Just let it be. Some will see what you wrote, but most won't emphasize on that. Readers pull themes from writing based on their own personal background, and life experiences. If you really want people to see what you are writing about you can try the Nathaniel Hawthorne approach; after all your metaphors and symbols are written, you can come straight out and tell the reader what you meant in the poem. Hawthorne does this several times in his and it worked for him.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    This poem is cool. I liked how you stated your lose of concentration. Every one goes through that.

  • 19 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    you dont need to post twice... but thank you!

  • 19 years ago

    by Laura Elizabeth

    wow i really like your poem!
    it's so beautiful!

    -Laura Elizabeth

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