by lasazz Jul 5, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Now what should i do should i really let go should i treat you like i would treat any 304 or should i follow my heart and see where it goes warm days and cool nights the smell of a sweet rose but if i follow me heart it may lead to pain |
Your poem was good, i think it could be better if you broke it down a bit if you know what i mean, the words are great but if it was layed out better i think you could get a better feel for the meaning of it....well done |