I like this poem it is very good, but not origanl (sp). good pome though!

Good poem, well done, interesting, iot was great to look at your poetry.. :)

My favourite stanza

"Life is a mystery
You search for clues
But can’t find the answer"

well done and keep writing, you have amazing potential and are already producing amazing writing :)

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thats so true. i agree with this poem 100%

Interesting poem! I thought the ryhme scheme was cool. I think I'll try it for one of my next poems! lol