by Ashli Jul 5, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
I wonder what it's like |
by x Saiya
Beautiful poem! Great job, I loved it. |
by Jamie
*so smooth and graceful, not too lol sorry bout that |
by Jamie
This kinda confused me because the poem was about what the sunrise in heaven is like but two stanzas you mentioned having already seen it and this would have worked if both of those stanzas had been at the end because then i could sense that you somewhere along the line had died...but you stuck one right in the middle so it didnt make sense other then that great flow great rhyming greatttt word usage i dont know if its the topics or just your style but eveything seems to smooth and graceful |
you write sensational poems. |
by Mandy Lou
This is great! It's nice to think about what is waiting for us after life on earth is over! Great Write! |