I Give Up

by Rachel   Jul 5, 2005


I can't live this life anymore
Day after day,
Scar after scar
My flaws are getting to me
They're starting to show
What's the point in living
If there's nothing to live for?
No one to live for?
Broken and alone
You call this a life?
I'd call it a mistake
You say that you love me
But that's nothing but fake,
I'm sorry, I can't do this anymore
I give up
It might not be my time to go
But I want to go
I just can't stay here
I give up.
It's over.

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  • 19 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    That was brilliant, I know what u mean though..life can get so hard, and sometimes i wonder why i even bother living anymore..but we bother because we are much stronger than that! we cant let anyone get the best of us! we have to keep going, no matter how hard it is. life goes on. if every unhappy person in this world gave up their life, there would be no one left in this world. that shows something. think of all the poor, starving, homeless people in africa. they are in a much worse condition than we'll ever be. n they're still going strong. remember, we might get hurt emotionally day after day, but those people get hurt emotionally n physically day after day..and until they have enough money and food, their pain just goes on. stay strong hun im here for ya xxxx