i thought it was really good i just cant explain it.it got ot me on a different level.

I'm becoming a huge fan of your work...I love the simplicity and overwhleming emotion in your writing. You're doing a wonderful job.

Simple, yet very emotional and meaningful. I love it. Sweet dreams. :)

I really like it! geat job!

Another great poem! Keep up the excellent work.

I'm overcoming depression right now and my only featured poem has all the words. Thanks for all your critique and i hope for your support :)

Well done, awsome poem!

I think you should add some more poems to your featured list cause they are all so good!!!

absolutely wondedrful.. the way u kept it short gave it meaning.. no more.. i enjoyed it..
No more crying
No more pain
No more thunder
No more rain

i loved this part.. ur gr8
take care
nouna

Thanx for the comments =] I really like this poem, It's short but sweet.

luv natz x0x

I like the structure, and the repetition helps it to flow.

xx

This was an intresting poem.. n i liked it very much. ur poems have alot of potential. keep it up