it may not be finished yet, but it's already so pretty

Dunno how I feel about this one. Its not original but its not bad. X

wow, you have a realy good message, I hope this isn't your home... living the lie of a perfect life realy sucks. you might want to work on some re-wording, some parts don't seem to fit.

~Breeze

wow thats rele good *jackie

Wow i think this poem is the best 100/100 if only i could vote that high
Leona