by Sarah Ashley Jul 6, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
When i close my eyes |
by Sarah Ann
It was good, the only thing I would suggest is to let your words flow more freely...you can read poetry many ways, but when I read it I felt it was kind of broken in some way...nevertheless, the idea was nice and the theme behind it...you ended the poem beautifully with: |