wow this poem is .. i dont even know you did such a lovely job and i know the feelings to you said them so well you really are good at making poem i do hope you keep up thegood work and i hope everything works outs and i know that wait to it's hard but if haveing him in the end it's worth it 5/5

great poem! I loved the angry/desperate atmosphere. Definitely a great read. I've felt this way so many times....hopefully this guy sees the beauty in you or maybe you'll just have to move on. Good luck, either way. 4/5.

heart, that is the most important thing you can put into poetry. I thought this was wonderful. Take care and thank you for the comment.

That was soo beautiful!! This whole poem i loved. i can tell you put alot of heart, and thinking into it. Great Poem!! Keep up the good work!
Smiles, and Hugs Ashley

i really liked it ur really good keep up th good wrk

the poem is really good. it has meanings and its really deep. mad props.